They are all possible - hoodies could be seen as offensive, perhaps, but that can be waved off convincingly by explaining that the instinctive fear white people have of them is a result of Templar conditioning.
First, tell a good story. Then have someone check it over for major and minor fails, then someone else to check it for continuity and other such things. Realize you will not catch all of it, and sometimes you will have to indulge for the story's sake, and then do better next time.
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Date: 2013-10-02 07:55 pm (UTC)First, tell a good story. Then have someone check it over for major and minor fails, then someone else to check it for continuity and other such things. Realize you will not catch all of it, and sometimes you will have to indulge for the story's sake, and then do better next time.